I am sporty, friendly and fit
Brother to Jephte
I am a lover of dogs
Who feels happy when it is christmas
Who needs internet to go on my netbook
Who gives presents and toy on birthdays
Who fears when someone gets a gun and is going to shoot me
Who would like to see someone famous like Usain bolt
I live in point england
HI Jonathan,
ReplyDeleteYour Poem is very interesting. I like dogs too! I think one thing you forgot to mention was that you're really fast. One day, you'll be as fast as Usain Bolt! And more well known than him. Although I like your writing, there are a few things I would suggest you work on. Like: word endings, toys instead of toy. But other than that! Great Job! KEEP IT UP!!